The Cornflake Lion
Once upon a time there was a lion called Cornflake, he was different from other lions. All the other lions liked hunting and fighting but Cornflake liked something else. He loved dancing to the beat of the drums. He did it so often that he got very good at it, all the other lions laughed at him. One day Cornflake decided to perform a show for the rest of the pride, before the show it was very exciting for him to show them his moves. After the performance, all of the other lions were jealouse of Cornflakes moves.
By Oliver
I really enjoyed your hundred word challenge Oliver. I really like how you used the words especially with cornflake. I only found 1 spelling error. You are a very good writer Oliver.
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