Wednesday, 1 June 2016

100 Word Challenge Term 2 Week 5


A tramper coming back from his nice walk sits down in his cabin and starts to read his book. Well he was reading his book a winter storm comes into the valley.  The wind forces the man to close the windows and doors.  Suddenly a gust of wind gets through I get in the door and knocks the power box, darkness falls. The man lights a candle to give him light and comfort. He was  reading as the flame flickered and then went out. He calls 111 and gets saved.

By Oliver Barris

3 comments:

  1. Hi Olly nice story I'm sure Mr.McKay will be happy with that because I can't fault it. Come check out my blog @ https://sscolem.blogspot.co.nz

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  2. Wow Ollie thats awesome

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  3. Hi
    Nice story. Next time you might want to check punctuation and you could also make it more descriptive. Otherwise great. Please come and check out my blog at
    http://sstanikan.blogspot.co.nz/
    Thanks Tanika

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