One day there was a man called Tim, he has no friends. When he was born he had a real disease called Ebola small twin brother which is a small black spot on his knee. At school is always bullied because of his spot. One day he saw that his spot was getting bigger, and fast. At that moment he was rushed to hospital but sadly they couldn't stop it. They had no idea what would happen to him. Then it stopped and just disappeared forever.
The end
By Oliver Barris
Sup Oliver
ReplyDeleteThat was mean as i liked your ideas although it did not have what it was supposed to in it.
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George Oliver
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ReplyDeleteCool story, you forgot the sentence you were supposed to put in the story. It was on google classroom.
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